Changes from second feedback

As a group we felt that some of the shots in which we filmed were slighly blurry, this was due to the fact that one of the cameras was not focused enough. Nevertheless the shots that were taken looked really good, so this means that in the next filming session we know exactly what we need to achieve.

Other changes include:

TRAIN:
1. Shot of Matt getting on the train
2. Shot of Matt sitting down
3. Ipod shot- CU, MS
4. Newspaper shot- MS, CU
5. Matt getting off the train- MS, LS


Will's shots
1st shot= Balcony shot - Slow tilt LS
2nd shot= show suitcases
3rd shot= Open suitcases= reveal money- LS, CU, MS
4th shot= Reading paper on balcony- MS, CU = Reinforces narrative.

Instead of showing all of Matt's shots then all of Will's shots we decided to show a dual representation. This means that the audience will be able to engage with both characters throughout, instead of one at a time.
E.G.
1. Doors closed by the balcony - MS, LS
2. Hand on train - CU
3. CU of Will looking out of balcony
4. POV shot from Will looking onto skyline
5. Matt steps out of train station.

Additional changes:
+ Re film shot 3 = footsteps and walking
+ Music= use music that runs pararrell against the CGI effect
+ Establishing shots= characters enter into the shot
+ Less walking scenes
+ More of Matt on the train
+ Use cross dissolve between shots