Teacher evaluation

GRADE A

+ Demonstrates excellence across most technical aspects
+ The titles are highly effective developing generic/ narrative features through semiotics and colour use.
+ The overall feel of the piece (editing/sound in particular) is engaging fitting the chosen sub-genre.

- the transition between the titles and opening scene is inflective
- titles could have continued to include "producer"/ "director"/ a cross dissolve into an establishing shot would have
better fit the generic codes and conventions.
- some of the animation could have been smoothed out to add a greater degree of polish to the finished artifact.

From the teacher comments in which I received, I feel completely satisfied with the response in which we got. The target for our project was to create an action thriller witholding the generic codes and conventions of that particular sub-genre. From the teacher and group feedback I feel that we have achieved a text that meets the codes and conventions of an action-thriller. In order to further develop our project I feel that the main objective would be to extend the length of our title sequence. Apart from this I feeel l that no major changes would need to be made to extend the quality of our project.